Poems

We were assigned a space and told to move,
standard quarters, designated by a type.
Sorted neatly by the count of their rooms,
and the precise curtilage enclosing them.

 

They are meted out to individuals,
never by the number of souls in a family,
but strictly by rank, by status, by score.
I do not know who divided our lives in half.

 

A mid-level officer with adolescent children,
with ageing parents under his roof,
with relatives visiting season after season,
is crammed into a quarter of fewer rooms.

 

While an officer at the peak of the hierarchy,
whose parents have long since passed,
whose children have grown and scattered,
who has no kin left to cross his threshold,
inherits a bungalow that only echoes.

 

What do you call this machine,
that denies substance to those in need?
Hoarding space for the heavily decorated,

inherited rules or a heartless algorithm?

 

 

If it is measured in square feet,

but not care how many live in it without losing their dignity,

They would be calling it protocol; you call it entitlement,

I call it a house that forgot how to be a home.

 

~

Jay Jagdev


Mitra Samal
Totally relatable and liked the sarcasm

ବିଜୟ ମହାପାତ୍ର
ହାଉସ୍ ଓ ହୋମ ମଝିରେ ପାର୍ଥକ୍ୟକୁ ମୁଁ ଆପଣଙ୍କ କବିତାରେ ଲକ୍ଷ୍ୟ କରୁଛି, ହୋମର ଆନ୍ତରିକତା ହାଉସ୍‌ ରେ ନଥାଏ, ଖୁବ୍ ଭଲଲାଗିଲା କବିତା, ହୃଦୟରୁ ଅଭିନନ୍ଦନସହ

ବିଜୟ ମହାପାତ୍ର
ହାଉସ୍ ଓ ହୋମ ମଝିରେ ପାର୍ଥକ୍ୟକୁ ମୁଁ ଆପଣଙ୍କ କବିତାରେ ଲକ୍ଷ୍ୟ କରୁଛି, ହୋମର ଆନ୍ତରିକତା ହାଉସ୍‌ ରେ ନଥାଏ, ଖୁବ୍ ଭଲଲାଗିଲା କବିତା, ହୃଦୟରୁ ଅଭିନନ୍ଦନସହ

Naina Choudhury
Reading through these replies, it is beautiful to see how many people have poured their own share of nostalgia into these comments. I have never personally lived in these quarters, yet I love how this poem has acted like a stone thrown into a quiet pond, stirring the minds and memories of so many. It masterfully exposes the tragedy of a system that can calculate and measure a house, but completely fails to engineer the emotional dignity required to turn that space into a home.

Mou Sarkar
It did resonate with me. Our quarters were to small. Though we never felt crowded, as we were small too, and with Dad n Mom around it still felt bigger. Even relatives used to come we loved sleeping and huddling together, as for small kids those were happy times, and meant no offhand beatings for any mistakes.

Dr Pranjya Eleanar Valentina Mishra
How beautiful and realistic the poem is! The words are assembled so nicely to depict the emotions of an individual, with the space of the houses allotted to the person along the official timeline. Maybe the big space, or the empty space at the end, is given to keep the EGO of power and position, to show it off to the world.The poem seems to remind us that space, position and authority are temporary, while the human being behind them is ultimately small and transient. That is what makes the poem feel both beautiful and realistic. Love the poem.

Prof K V Dominic
What you have stated is absolutely right dear sir. The government always stands for the rich and the mighty and ignores the majority have-nots who elected them. The government dances to the tunes of the multi billionaires who constitute less than ten percent of the nation.

Dr. Snehaprava Das
Nice poem on the discriminatory manner in which houses are allotted. Sometimes the dwellers find it difficult to mske a home out of them. The disparity denies them a sense of belonging. Thank you sir

Chandrakant
Straight from heart and the thought has stayed with me . Looking back , may be that taught us to give up , live with others and sharing .

Mrutyunjay Sarangi
Same with salary also. When you need lots of money to meet the education expenses of children and feed their ever-hungry mouths you get a pittance. By the time you reach the Apex scale the children have left for their job and your need is much reduced.

R Sunanda Chowdhury
Surprisingly I could relate completely with your poem as we used to stay a small MES quarter occupied by a big family of 8 persons in camp 2, AFS Kalailumda throughout my schooling since my birth. Because ofy father`s generous nature and my mother`s simplicity guests always preferred to stay with us inspite of my uncle`s home nearby. My friends staying in air force multi room quarters with small families used to question me how we could manage to study, accommodate guests in our home. But my industrious and benevolent father had made a big garden better to be called as nandan van and had grown varieties of fruits, vegetables, flowers, crotons, herbs etc which not only helped in providing fruits n vegetables, flowers but was a park for colony childrens, home to many birds, and extension of our home for me to study in daytime. Thanks for writing such poetries sir. It`s really so fresh yet makes you nostalgic.

R Sunanda Chowdhury
Surprisingly I could relate completely with your poem as we used to stay a small MES quarter occupied by a big family of 8 persons in camp 2, AFS Kalailumda throughout my schooling since my birth. Because ofy father`s generous nature and my mother`s simplicity guests always preferred to stay with us inspite of my uncle`s home nearby. My friends staying in air force multi room quarters with small families used to question me how we could manage to study, accommodate guests in our home. But my industrious and benevolent father had made a big garden better to be called as nandan van and had grown varieties of fruits, vegetables, flowers, crotons, herbs etc which not only helped in providing fruits n vegetables, flowers but was a park for colony childrens, home to many birds, and extension of our home for me to study in daytime. Thanks for writing such poetries sir. It`s really so fresh yet makes you nostalgic.

Jhumpaa Mitra Ray
I cldnt relate to the sentiments much...as in my high school days till +2 I used to stay wd my Uncle at ISO 4...Cantonment rd ...katak...as my Uncle was elevated in 1982 n got thz bunglow allotted to him...huge rooms ..massive garden...pets...servants quarters etc...but whn I read thz out to my husband...Biju instantly agreed...as my father in law...biju`s bada mamu were BDO n Tahsildar...Biju n his friends spent their lives in these "type" quarters...

Suresh Kumar Mishra
I was content in staying in rented accomodation except for a year in 92-93. Barely, could I settle when I was transferred to Baripada. I move to Baripada on 1st. March 93 and my family started back in government quarter. A penal rent bill at market rate was slapped on me. Since, transfer was in the middle of academic session, on my representation, the penal rent was stayed. Getting a government accomodation was difficult by personal request before the estate officer and that too, not to your liking condition wise and area wise.

Lopamudra Mishra
I could feel the sentiments behind each syllable as I live with such memories. Living in quarter and then leaving behind it used to be a heart breaking experience. Well narrated.

Samir Ranjan Mohapatra
How true! I can perfectly relate to my own case. I was allotted a senior officer’s bungalow when my children and one of parents weren’t there.I never got one when I needed it. Nice depiction in your poem.

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